Chancelucky

Wednesday, August 16, 2006

Ocean in a Box (fiction)



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posted by Chancelucky @ 11:00 AM

6 Comments:

At 8/16/2006 12:55:00 PM, Blogger pissed off patricia said...

Whew, lots of emotions in that post. You could say they sort of flooded out. Seems you are thinking about sad events and events that tend to jumble the rhythm of life. I think that if you dive beneath the surface of most people’s lives you will find many different currents that are not apparent on the surface at first glance.

 
At 8/16/2006 02:13:00 PM, Blogger Chancelucky said...

POP,
to be clear, this was written as fiction, but I absolutely agree most people have more swirling around beneath than we ever imagine.

 
At 8/16/2006 07:22:00 PM, Blogger benny06 said...

Chancelucky,

You have given us more of your soul to us, just like a private diary, yet, you choose to do this to help others, just as time I choose to reveal myself at times.

Blessings be with you---at this time.

Benny

 
At 8/16/2006 07:46:00 PM, Blogger Chancelucky said...

Benny,
thanks, but this is fiction so please understand that the "I" of the story is not me.

 
At 8/20/2006 04:27:00 AM, Blogger Dale said...

Wow, there's a lot going on in there. I need a drink! But is it fiction? :-)

 
At 8/20/2006 12:11:00 PM, Blogger Chancelucky said...

Dale,
thanks for reading. And here I worried that the number of things swirling around in the story seemed a little over the top.
If you need a drink, POP runs a place called Morning Martini.

 

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